The
major differences in these two pieces of work are power and freedom, while
Thoreau advocates that the government shouldn’t have so much power and the
society should stray from the majority, Machiavelli believes in making the society
fear the ruler (or government) establishing the power, giving the society very
little freedom. Both authors establish two different perspectives as to how a
society should act and how it should governed.
Machiavelli
believes in belittling citizens, making them feel small, intimidating them,
establishing that he is in charge and no one should even think to cross him or
they will face the unknown consequences. He also says that lying before being
put into power is okay, you have to do what you have to do, once you’re in
power you can you’re your real colors. We discussed in class that, in some
ways, this is how real politics works. Many candidates that run for any
position promise the people many things just to look good, gaining votes. Now
are these lies bad? Are the necessary? That was something we came to a dead end
with. There’s no way to stop these “white lies”. Machiavelli addresses this when
saying a ruler should show his generosity, spend his own money giving back and
such, but once elected as ruler, use the citizens money for whatever he may be
showing his “generosity” towards.
Thoreau, however,
almost argues the exact opposite, the government shouldn’t have as much as
power as it does. He even goes on to say that the government treats the
citizens, and any government employers as “puppets”. He expresses in a sense
that militants are government puppets that have lost all humanity, who will do
anything for the government at any costs. This creates and evokes his readers,
what if we are really just puppets for the government? Thoreau even goes to the
extent of not paying his taxes to get his point across….he suffered those
consequences.
I like how you emphasize the difference between the two thinkers by separating their ideas into different paragraphs. However, I think you could try to wrap your ideas up a bit more. Try to make reason with Machiavelli's white lies, hard as it may be. Maybe a small conclusion at the end could do this, especially if you include Thoreau's beliefs as comparison.
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about the power struggle of the writers. Also, I like how you added how they told white lies to comfort their audience. It made them seem manipulative
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