As a high school student we are
pressured into figuring out what college we will go to, what career path we
will choose, basically we need to figure out what our life will be at the age
of 14-18. But we still have to raise our
hand to use the bathroom and most importantly we can’t leave the school during
our lunch break to relax outside of a stressful school environment. How can we
go from being so restrained from being independent to being thrown out into the
real world expected to follow a career path? In the real world you can take your
lunch break, leaving your job for around 45 minutes to get some coffee or get
some food away from the stressful work environment you are in all day. We as
high school students are babied wayyyyyy too much, and can’t even leave our
cafeteria to go upstairs without being stopped and forced to stay there. Many
students don’t even eat lunch because the school premade lunches are absolutely
appalling, and to top it off we are forced to buy an apple or have a side of
broccoli. This “healthy” side is usually just thrown out, so not only do most
teens just not eat, if we do the majority of the lunch is thrown out, wasting a
lot of food. If we could just leave the school for 45 minutes many students
would eat food that is appealing to them.
High
school is the most stressful place there is for the normal teen, and if you ask
adults today they would never want to be a high school student now with all the
work, deadlines and restrictions we have today. 19.3 percent of high school
students have seriously considered killing themselves, and 14.5 percent of high
school students made actual plans for committing suicide, from being so
stressed from school and from depression in many cases. If we could be granted
the permission to leave just for our lunch break to de-stress and relax, maybe
even just to go home and eat lunch, this high school student suicide rate could
decrease.
I thought this was a great blog loaded with Pathos and Logos. I liked your analogy you used when you talked about students having to still raise their hands when using the bathroom. I found this releatable. However when you said "wayyyyy" in your first paragraph I thought that was pretty informal. Other than that, great!
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